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Wednesday, August 7, 2019

my mum

                                                                             My mum


My mum has dark red hair.
My mum has honey eyes.
My mum has 80 books.
My mum has 6 sons.
My mum loves pink.
My mum likes to play on her phone.
My mum likes to brush her teeth.
My mum loves to play with me.
My mum loves me and my brothers.
My mum likes to go on her tv.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Cheyenna, I like the way you described your mum and the way she looks. What does she watch on her TV? Maybe next time you can describe her personality. Mrs O'Donnell

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    1. Hi mrs o Donnell this is Cheyenna Thank you for commenting
      on my mum Cheyenna@

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  2. Hi Cheyenna I am Sneha I like the way you described your mum. Can you please add more about your mum and what she does? have a nice day.

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    1. ok yes i will do more thank you sneha and you have a nice dayvto

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