this is some changes i want around the school
I Enjoyed Spending my Time On This
Kia ora I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee And Whaea Tamzin. Kahikatea is is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
this is some changes i want around the school
I Enjoyed Spending my Time On This
NL: to describe
RT:share the characters feeling and thoughts
Cyan= main character
Blue=describing the character
Green= I edited it
The day i found a alien in my backyard :)
A long time ago there was such thing called aliens.they where called green enemies back in the olden days,one night I was trying to sleep but there was a slight of light. I looked out the window and I saw a bunch of smoke so I
decided to go and check. I went to go check outside and I wanted to get a closer look. I get closer and see some werid person with antennas,I go have a look and I scream out of fearness GREEN ENEMIE!!!!!!!!!!. I run inside and SLAM my door close, I go to sleep and in the morning I wont stop forgetting about the alien In my backyard. this is my space writing and i had edited this whole thing,Have you edited a peice of writing? and do you like your writing?I would put a password on the call
I would make the class bigger
Make one side for free time and the other a learning side
When its someones birthday we have to sing happy birthday in maori
Every monday we have to sing a different moari song
There will be tautokon (support). what would u change if u where the class president?
This is my planet and i think this would be kinda cool if it was real!
i enjoyed useing all the different colors
I love this so much and i think its great
have u ever made a planet and would you?