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The day i found a alien in my backyard :)
A long time ago there was such thing called aliens.they where called green enemies back in the olden days,one night I was trying to sleep but there was a slight of light. I looked out the window and I saw a bunch of smoke so I
decided to go and check. I went to go check outside and I wanted to get a closer look. I get closer and see some werid person with antennas,I go have a look and I scream out of fearness GREEN ENEMIE!!!!!!!!!!. I run inside and SLAM my door close, I go to sleep and in the morning I wont stop forgetting about the alien In my backyard. this is my space writing and i had edited this whole thing,Have you edited a peice of writing? and do you like your writing?
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