"We finally found the suspect"

 Kia ora today I was writing my stroy i had to write about and i was wondering if panadsonly eat bamboo and the reason why i was wondering about that was because the stroy i was doing was about why the animal stole the bamboo and how did the animal get caught, and mine was where you had to find how the animal stole and how he got caught.Anyways thats all but i'm gonna show you my story cya on the otherside!.“We finally caught the suspect”

Oh no someone has stolen all the bamboo!And the suspect are, Mountain gorllia, red panda, panda, Bamboo lemur, Bamboo rat.Were going to have grow more bamboo!.If you see anyone take OR eat the rest tell mt staright away ! ( 1 hour later ) They haven’t come to the office to tell me if tey had seen anyone so im check the cameras ... wait  i coiled just checked the cameras an hour ago, hah then the bamboo stealer will never will never steal the bamboo ever again mahaha.. ok now lets get on the cameras already, Ok uhhh now lets look at cam7 wait.. Why is Mountain gorllia near the bammboo AHAH  WE FINNALLY CAUGHT THE SUSPECT! HAH but next time i will put some of his own bamboo.

This was my story and i actaully like it but i could use some better clues that i could put in it like find foot steps and all that but yea, Have you done this before?and will you?.